Sunday, June 19, 2011

Wind.....


   
 The Wind…..



 It takes away with it a lot,

Leaves & lives - the wind aghast,

Can it bring back my golden days alas!


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OSI Prompt : Wind


17 comments:

  1. Wish winds could do this... very beautiful..

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  2. Storms can be devastating. And some loss can never be made up. Pain in words can be felt.

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  3. I love the play on words using aghast which made me think immediately of the word "gasp".

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  4. Ahh...those golden days, may the wind send them back to all of us. Nice work Premi!

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  5. Wouldn't that be wonderful!!!

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  6. Bringing back the golden days...how we long for those.

    Nice words.

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  7. Nicely constructed. Lovely rhyme scheme. Alas, the answer is no!

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/20/bella/

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  8. Of course it can, it is only how you treat things and life...:)

    I love your short sweet lines!

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  9. Beautifully written. Abs loved it.

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  10. If it has the power to take away,it can bring back too.
    Short and sweet!

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  11. If only! I really enjoyed your poem.

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  12. beautiful!!!! reminded me of "ode to the west wind" by Shelly

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  13. it was short but so intense !!
    amazing.

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  14. check out our short story slam today.
    bless you,

    lovely poetry.

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