Wish winds could do this... very beautiful..
Storms can be devastating. And some loss can never be made up. Pain in words can be felt.
I love the play on words using aghast which made me think immediately of the word "gasp".
nature and its secrets!
Ahh...those golden days, may the wind send them back to all of us. Nice work Premi!
Wouldn't that be wonderful!!!
Bringing back the golden days...how we long for those.Nice words.
Ah, yes...a lovely read!
Nicely constructed. Lovely rhyme scheme. Alas, the answer is no!http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/20/bella/
Of course it can, it is only how you treat things and life...:)I love your short sweet lines!
Beautifully written. Abs loved it.
If it has the power to take away,it can bring back too.Short and sweet!
If only! I really enjoyed your poem.
beautiful!!!! reminded me of "ode to the west wind" by Shelly
it was short but so intense !!amazing.
check out our short story slam today.bless you,lovely poetry.