Sunday, March 25, 2012

Transition




In transit...


Passage of moments,
From this to next…

Each moment in transit, as it will…

Me… just being with the truth,
Right now… the way as it looks…

Silently… 'my' role getting over,
…For the 'witness' to take over...

In a transition so subtle… so still…





10 comments:

  1. Beautifully evokes the change from participant to observer!

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  2. Beautifully expressed. Lovely Preml.

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  3. Lovely. The quality of stillness threads your poem.

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  4. Sometimes, subtle transitions are the best kind.

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  5. Oh this is very silent piece, very cooling, very beautiful.

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  6. How roles change. To know it and feel it can be challenging and powerful.

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  7. "so subtle, so still" So beautiful, PremI, so philosophical and serene.
    Thanks for stopping by my blog, too.
    Best, M.

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  8. somehow we are always in transition didn't we ?
    it's just we never realize :)

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  9. Soooo nice, Premi ~~ The 'witness' adds a little mystery.
    Who might this person be taking over? I wonder ...

    Being in 'in transit' is very unsettling isn't it?
    ..

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  10. Hi Premi,

    In transit,,, very beautifully expressed. Yes, we all go through it sometime or the other. Some of us realize it in time and survive, some when it is too late and regret..

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