Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Balloon




The balloon so beautiful
So colourful…
The toddler fills in his breath into it
Allowing it to fly above, on the sky
As it soars higher & higher…
His dream coloured eyes grow wider…


The tired man
Tilling the soil
Eyes shrunk… desperate
Gazing his son
Toiling… for his dreams to reap…


for OSI:Balloon



17 comments:

  1. though sounds sort of indirect at the outset...it subtly yet clearly conveys the author's mind...picturesque presentation....

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  2. love the words ....and the drawing!!

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  3. Parent toil for their child to get best they can afford and wish for the best! Anxiety of a parent so well pictured in words.

    Simple expressive sketch too.

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  5. my eyes grow wider as the balloon sails higher.

    lovely imagery.

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