Sunday, January 29, 2012

Mr. Right



One Single Impression.. Wrong

Life spent, searching Mr. Right,
Of her ’perception’
Remained alone… till end!

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16 comments:

  1. Ah, life must always be a compromise. Great words.

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  2. Finding the perfect match? Hmmmm...

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  3. Sad tale this!! But a good message there...

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  4. Good poem, Premi! You may have hit on a key, of many, as to why some women don't marry. Good thing Mrs. Jim didn't worry about finding Mr. Right. I was Mr. Will Do. :)
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    1. Oh there in your humbleness Mrs.Jim has seen her Mr.Right
      And for your awesome Write...! ☺

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    2. Oh there in your humbleness Mrs.Jim has seen her Mr.Right
      And for what you Write...! ☺

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    3. Oh there in your humbleness Mrs.Jim has seen her Mr.Right
      And for your awesome Write...! ☺

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  5. poor she! I think at the end her perception must have changed 180 degrees!

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  6. Mr. Right truly is elusive! Great take on the prompt.

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  7. Interesting take on the prompt. Perceptions can be misleading, and Mr. Right might very well be an illusion.

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  8. Sad, but this can happen so easily. Life moves along while we are making other plans. Well done Preml.

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  9. Nicely done! I have some friends who have done the exact thing- their perceptions indeed! And... Happy Birthday!!! :)

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  10. Beautifully done with minimum words. Oh I wish, if she knew whether she won or lost.

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  11. You played really well with your words.
    Said a lot in very few words.

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