In transit...
Passage
of moments,
From
this to next…
Each
moment in transit, as it will…
Me…
just being with the truth,
Right
now… the way as it looks…
Silently… 'my' role getting over,
…For
the 'witness' to take over...
In
a transition so subtle… so still…
Beautifully evokes the change from participant to observer!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed. Lovely Preml.
ReplyDeleteLovely. The quality of stillness threads your poem.
ReplyDeleteSometimes, subtle transitions are the best kind.
ReplyDeleteOh this is very silent piece, very cooling, very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHow roles change. To know it and feel it can be challenging and powerful.
ReplyDelete"so subtle, so still" So beautiful, PremI, so philosophical and serene.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by my blog, too.
Best, M.
somehow we are always in transition didn't we ?
ReplyDeleteit's just we never realize :)
Soooo nice, Premi ~~ The 'witness' adds a little mystery.
ReplyDeleteWho might this person be taking over? I wonder ...
Being in 'in transit' is very unsettling isn't it?
..
Once aware,it is absolute peace Jim.
DeleteHi Premi,
ReplyDeleteIn transit,,, very beautifully expressed. Yes, we all go through it sometime or the other. Some of us realize it in time and survive, some when it is too late and regret..