The balloon so
beautiful
So colourful…
The toddler fills in
his breath into it
Allowing it to fly above,
on the sky
As it soars higher
& higher…
His dream coloured
eyes grow wider…
The tired man
Tilling the soil
Eyes shrunk…
desperate
Gazing his son
Toiling… for his dreams to reap…
for OSI:Balloon
though sounds sort of indirect at the outset...it subtly yet clearly conveys the author's mind...picturesque presentation....
ReplyDeletelove the words ....and the drawing!!
ReplyDeleteParent toil for their child to get best they can afford and wish for the best! Anxiety of a parent so well pictured in words.
ReplyDeleteSimple expressive sketch too.
Nice contrast here...
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Thank you Sandra!
Deleteinteresting metaphors.
ReplyDeletehappy Valentines day..
ReplyDeletemy eyes grow wider as the balloon sails higher.
ReplyDeletelovely imagery.
love the metaphor in the end.
ReplyDeletesmart poetry.
ReplyDeletewise.
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeletepowerful writing.
ReplyDeleteprofound.
ReplyDeletelove it.
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