It's beautiful and so full of emotion. Great job Premi.
lovely.stay hopeful.
Still hopes alive... this is the line which keep us going. Well written !!!Keep it up.
A vivid picture in a spare poem. Nice work. :-)
What hope can do! Well done, friend.
Lively.
emotional to be sure with a wonderfully positive ending!
Short yet very emotionally charged, great write
Beautiful Premi. Could feel the ripples.
It's beautiful and so full of emotion. Great job Premi.
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Still hopes alive... this is the line which keep us going.
ReplyDeleteWell written !!!
Keep it up.
A vivid picture in a spare poem. Nice work. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat hope can do! Well done, friend.
ReplyDeleteLively.
ReplyDeleteemotional to be sure with a wonderfully positive ending!
ReplyDeleteShort yet very emotionally charged, great write
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Premi. Could feel the ripples.
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