LOVE
Long-drives over the sea-link,
Enjoying the stillness of night….
Walking over the wet grass,
Adoring the freshness of morning…
Discussing Osho, Gibran and Tolle
Admiring the cool evening…..
May not happen again.
Encounter in the kitchen
With innovative recipes…
Chatting in a coffee shop
On world-wide topics…..
May only be a memory.
Intimate moments
In togetherness of hearts,
Listening to soft music…..
Fingers playing through your silky hair
May not be same any more.
Wish to travel around,
To be in the nature abound…..
May remain a dream.
But
Enduring shall be our love
Entwining two souls…..
Until we live…
After we leave.
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OSI Prompt : Endure
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OSI Prompt : Endure
Now that is real enduring.....real love.
ReplyDeleteThat was just beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful. Yes,
ReplyDelete"Until we live
After we leave"
I love that.
fantastically written !!
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful you have truly opened your heart up and we are blessed to be seeing what is inside!
ReplyDeleteA great sense of love and connection and shared life--friendship--here. I like this very much.
ReplyDeleteTruly beautiful and so heartfelt too. Thanks for this lovely interpretation of this prompt.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful yet sad poem, it just resonates with a lovely yet painful nostalgia that is hard to ignore. Creates lovely images too, almost tangible. Lovely work, although sad.I'd say sadly sweet....
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem Premi. Nice....
ReplyDeleteWow, the last para was simply lovely, you just made love eternal.
ReplyDeleteyou did beautiful job here, do share your work with us today.
ReplyDeleteBravo! This is lovely. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLife will always be a struggle, some futile, some meaningful and the latter we try to bask in glory!
ReplyDeleteShort but arresting thoughts!
I guess I went to the wrong comment box...:) MY apologies!
ReplyDeleteBut I like this romantic poem of yours! :) Very passionate!
The mood is perfectly captured,simple use of words add to the lucidity of thoughts.Nice work.
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