walking His way...
Walking on a road
That leads to Him…
...And led by Him…
Despite the pain and hurdles,
Manifests
Joy
Peace
And contentment….
Drifting on to a different path,
Wandering in search of new…
A ride so smooth and alluring,
Is only a mirage…?
Manifests
Grief
Anguish
And emptiness……..
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Simply impressive ..
ReplyDeleteI like the how the emotions flows throughout the poetry
Here's mine poetry work ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/05/23/satisfy-the-hunger-of-success/
HAPPY RALLY !! xD
Beautiful words! Sticking to a path, spiritual or otherwise can be quite fulfilling.
ReplyDeleteromantic...lovely!
ReplyDeleteGreat work, I am left wondering what or to whom (or Whom) your "different path" leads to.
ReplyDeletereally needed to read a poem like this right now. Lovely.
ReplyDeletebeautiful nicely done
ReplyDeleteloved it!
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