Sunday, July 31, 2011

A Glimpse...



Love…

Feeling uncomfortable in the pompous crowd,
She held his hand…
His mere look enough to comfort her!
***

Nature…

Brand new slippers causing discomfort…
Decides to walk bare footed
And the cool wet grass comforts her!
***

A Deal……….

Then you weren’t comfortable…
Paying the amount from below the table
Now as an officer on comfort cushion… other side of the table!
***

Comfort…

Though request for pardon denied
The truth being revealed…
He felt a bit relieved!
***

Surrender…

Tensed up by thoughts of agony and pain…
Confessing to the Silence deep within
Tremendous Peace sets in!
***

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17 comments:

  1. NankaSunday, 31 July, 2011

    Short free verses all
    Confessing they delivered
    Each one comforting

    :)

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  2. AnonymousMonday, 01 August, 2011

    all are so beautifully said...I love the first one!!

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  3. AnonymousMonday, 01 August, 2011

    Great set ~~

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  4. manjushaMonday, 01 August, 2011

    Each one telling a different tale...
    Each carrying a different mood...
    Comforting Confessions.Superb!

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  5. ScarletMonday, 01 August, 2011

    lovely set of haikus...

    thanks ~

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  6. bttrflyscarMonday, 01 August, 2011

    such talent! :)

    http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/07/confession.html

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  7. SandyCarlsonTuesday, 02 August, 2011

    You have me thinking being uncomfortable is a portal through which we must travel to find something better and more in ourselves and in life.

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  8. AnonymousTuesday, 02 August, 2011

    such varied images and words ! amazing :)

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  9. Harshad MehtaTuesday, 02 August, 2011

    I love the last one.
    Using pain, physical or emotional, to reach higher level of peace within. Surrendering is the key.

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  10. pattiTuesday, 02 August, 2011

    These are all excellent- being uncomfotable comes in all forms doesn't it?

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  11. Someone is SpecialTuesday, 02 August, 2011

    Prema.. First time on your blog.. I love it so much.. Very beautiful..

    Someone is Special

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  12. InterruptionWednesday, 03 August, 2011

    My comment went to another poem... do not know why! I love this...so unique. Surrender is by far my favorite...but all are wonderful!

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  13. Jyoti MishraThursday, 04 August, 2011

    Short but effective..
    all of them r awesome but loved the nature one most !!!

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  14. gsb3Friday, 05 August, 2011

    Enjoyed the many points of view and experiences reflecting uncomfortableness. Great job!

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  15. IsabelSaturday, 06 August, 2011

    love all the points of view as well. great write

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  16. Vinay Leo R.Saturday, 06 August, 2011

    Premi, just lovely verses :) but all are free verses of three lines again..

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  17. AnonymousSunday, 07 August, 2011

    Each one is just so lovely and thoughtful.

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